Gateless Gate 39

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Gateless Gate (Mumonkan, Wumenguan) #39
Yunmen and a Mistake in Speech

Personnel

• YUNMEN Wenyan (Ummon Bunen, 864-949, 13th gen), disciple of Xuefeng
• SIXIN Wuxin (Shishin Goshin, 1044-1115, 20th gen), disciple of Huitang

Case

A monk once asked Yunmen, “The radiance serenely illuminates the whole vast universe...”
Before he could finish the first line, Yunmen suddenly interrupted, “Aren't those the words of Zhang Zhuo?”
The monk replied, “Yes, they are.”
Yunmen said, “You have slipped up into the words.”
Afterwards, Zen Master Sixin brought the matter up and said, “Tell me, at what point did he slip?”

Wumen's Comment

If, as regards this case, you have grasped Yunmen's lofty and unapproachable activity and how the monk slipped up in his words, you are worthy to become a teacher of men and heavenly beings. If you are not yet clear about it, you have not even saved yourself.

Wumen's Verse

Angling in a swift stream –
Those greedy for bait will be caught;
If you open your mouth even a bit,
Your life will be lost.

Hotetsu's Verse Hotetsu's Verses on Koans

Appendix: Alternate Translations

Case

A monk once asked Yunmen, “The radiance serenely illuminates the whole vast universe...” Before he could finish the first line, Yunmen suddenly interrupted, “Aren't those the words of Zhang Zhuo?” The monk replied, “Yes, they are.” Yunmen said, “You have slipped up into the words.” Afterwards, Zen Master Sixin brought the matter up and said, “Tell me, at what point did he slip?”

Aitken: A monk said to Yün-men, “The radiance serenely illumines the whole universe...” Before he had finished the line, Yün-men interrupted him and asked, “Aren’t those the words of Chang-cho?” The monk said, “Yes, they are.” Yün-men said, “You have misspoken.” Later, the master Ssu-hsin took up this matter and asked, “Tell me, where did the monk misspeak?”

Cleary: A monk asked Yunmen about the line, "Radiant light silently illumines the universe." Before the monk had even finished, Yunmen abruptly said, "Aren't these the words of the schblar Zhang Zhuo?" The monk replied, "Yes." Yunmen said, "You're trapped in words." Later, Zen master Sixin brought this up and said, "Now tell me, where did the monk get trapped in words?"

Guo Gu: A monk asked Yunmen (about the poem), “The brilliant and quiescent luminosity pervades everywhere, (like sands in the) Ganges.” Before his sentence was finished, Yunmen interrupted, “Are these not the words of the scholar Zhang Zhuo?” The monk replied, “Yes.” Yunmen said, “Failed!” Later, Sixin picked this case up, “How did the monk’s words fail?”

Hinton: A monk asked Cloud-Gate Mountain: “Radiant brilliance silently illuminates this Cosmos vast as Ganges sands...” Before he could finish, Gate suddenly broke in and said: “Isn’t that the first line of Simpleton-Extent’s enlightenment poem?” “Yes.” “Exactly! You’ve got it all wrong!” Two hundred years later, Master Mind-Demise returned to this, saying: “Okay, right now: speak up! Tell me! Where was that monk’s mistake? How is it he got it all wrong?”

Low: A monk said to Ummon, “The radiance serenely illumines the whole universe. .. .” Before he could finish the line, Ummon interrupted him and asked, “Aren’t those the words of Chosetsu?” The monk said, “Yes, they are.” Ummon said, “You missed.” Later the master Shishin took up this matter and asked, “Tell me, how did the monk miss?”

Sekida: A monk said to Ummon, “The brilliance of the Buddha silently illuminates the whole universe . . .” But before he could finish the verse, Ummon said, “Aren’t those the words of Chōsetsu the Genius?” “Yes, they are,” answered the monk. “You have slipped up in your speaking,” Ummon said. Afterward, Shishin Zenji brought up the matter and said, “Tell me, at what point did the monk err in his speaking?”

Senzaki: A monk said to Ummon, “The brilliance of Buddha illuminates the whole universe—” Before he could finish, he was interrupted by the master: “You are quoting the poem of Cho, the candidate, are you not?” The monk answered, “Yes.” Then the master said, “You are off the track.” More than one hundred years after Ummon’s passing, Master Shishin told his students about this and said, “Tell me, monks, at what point did the monk go off the track?”

Shibayama: A monk once wanted to ask Unmon a question and started to say, “The light serenely shines over the whole universe.” Before he had even finished the first line, Unmon suddenly interrupted, “Isn’t that the poem of Chosetsu Shusai?” The monk answered, “Yes, it is.” Unmon said, “You have missed it!” Later Master Shishin took up this koan and said, “‘Now tell me, why has this monk missed it?”

Verse

Angling in a swift stream – /Those greedy for bait will be caught; /If you open your mouth even a bit, /Your life will be lost.

Aitken: A line is cast in the waters; /the greedy will be caught; /if your mouth opens just a bit, /your life is completely lost.

Cleary: He casts his hook in the swift current; /One greedy for the bait bites. /As soon as the seam of his mouth opens, /He's lost his natural life.

Guo Gu: Dropping a fishhook into a gushing stream; /The greedy (fish) gets caught. /As soon as it opens its mouth, /Life is lost!

Hinton: Cast a hook into such wild cascades, /and whoever’s greedy takes the bait. /That promise you are: even begin to /speak, and it scatters back into ruins.

Low: A line is cast in the swift stream; /The greedy will be caught; /If your mouth opens just a bit, /You will lose your life completely.

Sekida: A line is cast in the rapids, /The greedy will be caught. /Before you start to open your mouth, /Your life is already lost!

Senzaki: When a fish meets the fish-hook /If it is greedy, it will be caught. /When its mouth opens /Its life is already lost.

Shibayama: A line is dropped in a swift stream; /Greedy for the bait, he is caught. /If you open your mouth only a little, /Your life is lost!